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AP 20240617 Comments on draft ETSI EN 319 102-1 V1.4.0 (2024-03)

Electronic Signatures and Trust Infrastructures (ESI); Procedures for Creation and Validation of AdES Digital Signatures; Part 1: Creation and Validation

Electronic Signatures and Infrastructures (ESI)

NSO	Clause / Sub-clause	Paragraph Figure / Table	Type of comment (Technical^(^1) or Non-Technical)	COMMENTS	Proposed change	OBSERVATIONS on each comment submitted
SK1	4.1 Signature creation model	The second paragraph under the Figure 1, page 16	Non-Technical	The fifth bullet (point) in the second paragraph under the Figure 1 of the clause 4.1 · formats the result into a Signed Data Object (SDO) conforming to the desired signature format (e.g. CAdES [i.2], XAdES [i.4] and PAdES [i.6]); and contains abbreviations CAdES XAdES PAdES The abbreviations CAdES XAdES PAdES are not published in clause 3.3 Abbreviations on the page 14.	It is recommended to add abbreviation CAdES CMS Advanced Electronic Signature XAdES XML Advanced Electronic Signature PAdES PDF Advanced Electronic Signature PDF Portable Document Format in clause 3.3 Abbreviations on the page 14.
SK2	4.2.1 Introduction	The Figure 2, page 17	Non-Technical	The Figure 2 in the clause 4.2.1 contains abbreviation SDOC The abbreviation SDOC is not published in clause 3.3 Abbreviations on the page 14.	It is recommended to add abbreviation SDOC Signed Data Object Composer in clause 3.3 Abbreviations on the page 14.
SK3	4.2.5.1 General requirements	The first paragraph, page 19	Non-Technical	The first sentence of the first paragraph in the clause 4.2.5.1 on the page 19 Signature attributes shall be pieces of information that support the AdES signature and its interpretation and purpose and which may be covered by the signature together with the SD..... contains abbreviation AdES The abbreviation AdES is not published in clause 3.3 Abbreviations on the page 14.	It is recommended to add abbreviation AdES Advanced Electronic Signature in clause 3.3 Abbreviations on the page 14.
SK4	5.2.1 Description	The Figure 12, page 44	Non-Technical	The Figure 2 in the clause 4.2.1 contains abbreviations XCV CV The abbreviations XCV CV are not published in clause 3.3 Abbreviations on the page 14.	It is recommended to add abbreviation XCV X.509 Certificate Validation CV Cryptographic Validation in clause 3.3 Abbreviations on the page 14.
SK5	5.2.8.4.1 General requirements	The NOTE 2 to the first paragraph, page 55	Non-Technical	The NOTE 2 to the first paragraph (bullet (point)) in the clause 5.2.8.4.1 on the page 55 …. ~20 years. If a signature created with such a key is to be verified using this algorithm in 25 years from now, it can be secured by e.g. creating a time-stamp using an RSA-key of ~5 300 bits [i.14]. The algorithm…. contains incomplete information.	It is recommended to correct the NOTE 2 to the first paragraph (bullet (point)) in the clause 5.2.8.4.1 on the page 55 as follows …. ~20 years. If a signature created with such a key is to be verified using this algorithm in 25 years from now, it can be secured by e.g. creating a time-stamp using an RSA-key of ~5 300 bits according to ETSI TS 119 312 [i.14]. The algorithm….

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